Often that happens, doesn't it?
I wish I knew who said it first, but I'll share here.
I'm taking this excellent advice myself. If anyone can give credit to the original writer, please do. Don't want to steal someone else's words, but it's good advice.
THINGS
TO CUT
Adjectives
if 2 or 3, make 1 or 2
“Magic
2”: If a big paragraph, delete 2 sentences. Each sentence, delete 2 words. Short
sentences, delete 2 syllables
Beginnings
of each chapter!
People
rarely use names in conversation. Leave them out!
(I never use names in conversation. Well, hardly ever. And it bugs me when they're used repeatedly in dialog. Read it aloud and you'll see how awkward they sound!)
(I never use names in conversation. Well, hardly ever. And it bugs me when they're used repeatedly in dialog. Read it aloud and you'll see how awkward they sound!)
Cliches
and junk words (“well, just, even”).
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