Three Times Lucky was a fun read, a Newbery Honor book in fact, full of great characters.
The sequel-- or perhaps companion is a better fit--THE GHOSTS OF TUPELO LANDING, features the same folks.
Moses LoBeau is a champion of one-liners.
Like this:
"Few people know it, but waitressing is like deep cover--with tips."
Describing a character, upon his entrance:
"From a distance, I didn't like him. Up close, I liked him less."
And strong verbs, like these:
We slipped into the living room, Queen Elizabeth ticking along behind, and settled on Miss Lana's old curlicue settee.
Also in the good verb list: blasted off and shoved.
Queen Elizabeth's the dog. That's another thing to love about this middle-grade novel. The character names.
And how's this for showing a lot about someone without telling much:
"I crossed to my Salvation Army desk and opened my top drawer. It sticks."
Writers could learn a lot from Sheila Turnage. Check out her website. She might even tell you where you can buy a signed copy!
It is a good thing when a reader hoots as she scans the words.
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Sharon
Nice blog and review, Augusta. I'd actually thought last night that I hadn't seen a blog post in my inbox for awhile. Are you happy to be missed?
ReplyDeletedid my last comment take? Not sure. ANyway, enjoyed this review.
ReplyDeleteCarol- Thanks for noticing! We were in NY/ NJ for Thanksgiving- for a week, right after my long weekend at NCTE. Exciting, good times, but blogging went by the wayside.
ReplyDeleteAnd Sharon, I did love so many of the actual words in this book, as well as the fun story!
Well, I'm going to have to put this one on my TBR list. I love the examples you gave. Thanks for the review.
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